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And this is the opening to the new story Song of a Century. I was holding off on posting it, but I think posting the prologue and seeing the reception will make me more (or less) interested in finishing and getting inspiration for the first 5 chapters. Still, if you guys like this, then I'll like it better myself. I just hope I can keep the standard of the story from the prologue to the end . . . Must get back to it. I've just been writing essays lately, I need to get my pathos back!

I beg you, PLEASE comment. Tell me what you like about it, I mean saying "this is really good" is nice, but at least some people post something about what stands out and such . . . please?

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:
Chapter 6:

Preview picture (C) to me~!
Hetalia (C) to :iconhimaruyaplz:
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This is quite fascinating to read, it took me a moment to figure out who the characters were, but I am almost certain of whom they are at this point - however I shall leave names unsaid in an effort to allow other the pleasure of trying to solve the puzzle.

It seems that you have stuck to the theme of the 2P's, all while making them into something of your own, from what I can see simply by reading this. I was pleasantly surprised to be faced with no grammatical errors, or misspellings. Good job on that.

Over all, this was a well written piece, certainly above the standard for the fandom.